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A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul- l* S. H7 D) |, V
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for youtvb now,tvbnow,bttvb9 R! i) n& P. ]8 }: h

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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb7 [4 y) W0 N4 |* H4 u2 L  V. h* Y
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RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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' h4 r- s7 o, mtvb now,tvbnow,bttvbChasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you' @( B; P0 w. A! a9 h

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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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