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A Path Less TraveledTVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。0 ^. f7 y1 D$ g3 X/ V

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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...5.39.217.766 g- n6 t% H2 ?5 N) t8 [

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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb6 W8 W8 V" u+ P
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RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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: r; [5 U0 D7 L( W# l% M# d5.39.217.76I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul5.39.217.76) d! D) b  i5 U- E) B( t+ \: }

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# p' R0 d* J+ z. p' K0 i- m! o9 D公仔箱論壇If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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) x1 G2 o7 Q' \5.39.217.76And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...5.39.217.76# a- ]2 P! m8 }1 N* K) ^/ H( X+ M
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3 m& E! P- K8 x' ?7 [tvb now,tvbnow,bttvbWhere I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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