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+ R# y- d% w( P0 g6 I" atvb now,tvbnow,bttvbI am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? 公仔箱論壇( u. ~2 S: ^) e, _& |0 y7 @5 q

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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.3 v+ l& _/ Q: f2 e

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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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