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A Path Less Traveled
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?TVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。8 S' ?0 k0 H6 N$ J0 i( u
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..5.39.217.76% R8 g7 r8 Q5 J1 t6 m' g/ h
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...- z  {! B- u3 Z& a8 J$ P

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4 n6 O8 w4 ], J/ K' ~- X5 ?5.39.217.76If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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  X6 H( k/ s' Y) d8 WIf I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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rayoflight48

A Path Less Traveled
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: |, q' E. Q+ Q, f8 r4 k+ U$ Q. |+ Utvb now,tvbnow,bttvbChasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul5.39.217.76  s( z/ B" [' r  t& `  b7 h
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9 ]! J( j  ?! h1 l" A+ O" ?  P5.39.217.76If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..TVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。7 L* G" z  |+ c3 _

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) b" V( t5 q  Z' A! Q, H6 \5 B公仔箱論壇And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?5.39.217.765 F" y7 H# n' z) Q! D- F- u
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