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A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown5.39.217.766 X1 _- N. u$ V3 h1 \1 i  k. V

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0 P) [4 m4 o5 R" A5 B1 o公仔箱論壇Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you公仔箱論壇6 C7 p& A# B( [7 n1 O
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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# N1 j, C0 p3 N: o) t% |What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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: J' _: m  {9 v$ |If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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  [. K( C9 w# g& B9 ?5 JWhere I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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A Path Less Traveled
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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  E4 t! v2 R! V& h2 K5 _* WIf I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..! \# G% d: d& e# j2 F3 N1 O
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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