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1 t+ f* ~" U# |* Y5 X6 M# v8 n# Y公仔箱論壇I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul( e/ H. [0 m3 H7 l9 u8 \

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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?公仔箱論壇% i; Y6 I: N% Z3 t

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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..  D* J' n- Y' O  N0 b

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1 a" I3 p, n$ g0 n; c. I5.39.217.76And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?5.39.217.76" D; M' m4 \# n  y

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+ ~4 V: {( H! |5 y1 B) |5.39.217.76If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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A Path Less Traveled
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: s( i' ~- R- ^2 g+ [% K5.39.217.76I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown0 ]" X, K& B3 D8 m3 s

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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?5.39.217.763 x" H& C, Y2 R

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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb8 A" l2 W3 _- N# e: x' e7 X
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; X  s' R/ M3 J! J公仔箱論壇And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? , K& I" Z# x3 a- E- l% j

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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.( a* P, i1 e, ^- e
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