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A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul公仔箱論壇% f% V5 }6 ?; u; C3 }
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for youtvb now,tvbnow,bttvb8 _' R1 ^2 {2 B6 I6 o* ]. N
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。# f0 Y3 j/ r0 V0 [

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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb: Q% J/ _% ^; O
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RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled5.39.217.762 r% m4 Q4 S5 J2 h( w" f0 B; m
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknowntvb now,tvbnow,bttvb% z2 C# d/ l5 V8 g! U0 \
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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; P: h3 Z  c9 H3 v7 q0 O公仔箱論壇If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。% q: K5 U0 G, j3 _$ A
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...公仔箱論壇+ W/ s" `+ u: |, d
TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。, u% D5 |' W5 p. e' ^) r

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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Ray of Light
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