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A poem - 請多多指教

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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknowntvb now,tvbnow,bttvb, E% U# U  n. X1 t- [3 t
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul公仔箱論壇7 w6 j5 q# c! I/ p- C, b; v
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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2 j( j+ X. K( Q8 g7 Ntvb now,tvbnow,bttvbWhat if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。- \+ V, `3 z  ]4 y- e
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。+ G% n! W4 d/ L1 Z3 u2 |. X
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  ]- m. C, C" R' v1 mtvb now,tvbnow,bttvbIf I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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( y/ R% \) h. g  @' \Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul5.39.217.769 V8 s0 c7 K0 y) [( [3 `

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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you, E* x( D# C5 U* @0 K

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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。0 D4 z1 G. N# ^

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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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$ R8 [+ `* n7 z& E4 ZIf I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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