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A Path Less Traveled
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6 p8 Z, x. \1 y6 j公仔箱論壇I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul1 N8 F/ U' z6 x# n: l! j% M

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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Ray of Light
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rayoflight48

A Path Less Traveled2 n# E- k7 p/ y  D1 U# I

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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...! `9 _4 k) N9 @5 I, ^6 H( ~. j

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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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Ray of Light