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A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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: F* T' O% T# `7 H5.39.217.76I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown2 Q1 r3 `$ \3 E  P  O0 J5 i1 R5 h
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul. t$ p% {1 ^+ a2 |+ Z2 A0 |

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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you公仔箱論壇. z4 k8 V" r  g/ P' h

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3 g: c/ e. {  C" h$ t5.39.217.76What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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# d. D  v. @) LIf I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?& K- }3 V: p, D4 m8 X+ ]7 h, V2 @
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。! A2 J1 Z' c& d4 C6 b) {

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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.; w2 @2 E5 k5 C' ~" }$ I
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RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled公仔箱論壇6 L2 W, R3 g) R$ O) T$ z* l  v# t
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknowntvb now,tvbnow,bttvb3 v( ~* I$ p8 i  j, }) D
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..5.39.217.762 T3 L1 k+ e4 D2 C, h
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5 |& k5 P+ c* g; X* j2 z5.39.217.76And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...5.39.217.76! Q, p) u5 B$ c$ U

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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?公仔箱論壇! r7 O2 @/ q& k$ r2 S3 A+ K) s
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? 4 y& r5 _) [( j

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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb1 e# N( a: r) d

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