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A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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5 s( B  L. X5 M, _. GChasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you5.39.217.766 |$ v4 U& e+ ~2 X4 g: d$ |( @
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...公仔箱論壇3 b$ m6 i4 f$ i* z
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A Path Less Traveled
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..TVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。8 w3 P& }# o) p8 t9 }6 j4 Y
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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