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A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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5 ^2 {, x* K- O7 K9 H: N4 x5.39.217.76I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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# s) D% S4 {/ [. ]3 Q, K  s* qtvb now,tvbnow,bttvbChasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soulTVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。8 W7 ?8 `2 n) X( L  M( j5 o6 s8 Q

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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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1 U3 B. _7 D+ J/ ZWhat if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。. B* c" J3 J* b3 R# H+ D, s

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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...公仔箱論壇0 o4 ?  `+ Q3 \

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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb/ a% t$ i5 Q1 s/ x& o

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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? / T: h0 v3 d4 Z; C% w

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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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: B7 z* ^+ z) @) d公仔箱論壇Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul; t" `) Z+ @0 e0 A- ~" n
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you公仔箱論壇1 Q4 X! A2 x. }9 z

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8 e# h9 `6 k7 l% S+ l! w4 A+ vTVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?公仔箱論壇. Z" E; c  E6 x

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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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# F% l4 g# n7 G) ]If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.5.39.217.762 f: `( |. }- e% p4 [6 x4 P7 ~

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