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A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown' R% F7 y( U. i) Z1 M

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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?公仔箱論壇* D2 M$ K1 w" _" u  _) n2 L

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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..TVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。$ n( r5 M3 C2 M& {! x" }

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" \7 W% n) V5 U& G$ n' S8 j3 GAnd if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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A Path Less Traveled
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) m7 L5 I; \+ \3 ]' I% hI am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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6 p$ {3 j0 I3 h; D, @5.39.217.76Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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6 I( i3 B; r9 J公仔箱論壇If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for youTVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。6 \- t% ^. o/ w- h
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..TVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。2 o# x' L3 J+ o! X; U

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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?9 l* v5 \" Q" X

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