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A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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3 G# m, A8 X) a8 u公仔箱論壇I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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: H/ r+ g' R. f! @/ S0 ~5.39.217.76And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...5.39.217.76# R7 o; F% R. G# \5 p
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* E! s$ b& Y' l3 k1 K( ^If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。! y% i8 n6 S  Z
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RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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4 _+ Z. k( P- R7 Z- b+ i. C7 F公仔箱論壇Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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5 P$ G7 l+ N. Q8 Q( h5.39.217.76If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you: q) J; ?' I; L# ~  A% x& `
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9 a! A1 J' j7 Z7 U4 [1 [; e公仔箱論壇If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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9 d+ m) C1 R2 _; b! t, E% @; f+ gAnd if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb5 Z0 p6 M  B# Z; q# Y; f. M- g
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