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A Path Less Traveled5.39.217.769 D1 V( f3 m1 z3 P7 q, i+ N
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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+ a5 l' O( n1 d3 _: uChasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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5 Y. {6 K6 p/ g1 _& F  {2 IIf I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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6 p) h# _) j( \  J. m, Y6 N5.39.217.76If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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5 j4 M' {/ I. @5.39.217.76What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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6 _' G5 `6 w' r* v. t& Z# I5.39.217.76And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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9 ]/ i* @" d" @: K5 ^" n7 _tvb now,tvbnow,bttvbIf I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb; Q+ U4 W- w- y6 E
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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A Path Less TraveledTVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。) I1 _# k/ \1 ^' K* e

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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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6 X# s. u/ H; |  w* \6 C公仔箱論壇If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?TVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。$ P! G* O" }. Y$ Z2 i' z; s9 m

7 ~6 ?: t& k2 G2 @; u# ]5.39.217.76TVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。% t% n2 v1 q# e* `+ X
What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..- Y" T$ T  ?+ s$ Y% Q; w) J
TVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。" V& E% r1 P. {4 I7 a+ B! `( k

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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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