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作者: iamlaughing    時間: 2008-5-11 12:01 PM     標題: Hide & Seed

Enjoy and Please Comment!  I would love some feedback on the composition or technique or ideas!

Thanx!
作者: carolfeeling    時間: 2008-5-11 12:53 PM

need to improve exposure adjustment.
作者: bbnikki    時間: 2008-5-11 10:07 PM

What you want to express in this photo?
作者: iamlaughing    時間: 2008-5-11 11:26 PM     標題: 回復 #2 carolfeeling 的帖子

In what way do you think it can be improved?  Is the exposure too high?  That is, do you think it's over or under?  Color/white balance issue?

I am trying to improve my skill and would love to get more feedback!  Thanx!  :-D
作者: iamlaughing    時間: 2008-5-11 11:28 PM     標題: 回復 #3 bbnikki 的帖子

I wanted to capture the faces on these bottles.  Initially, I just wanted to capture the form/pattern of these bottle lining up but then I saw the faces and thought it was very interesting.  Actually, it was scary at first since it feels like something was staring out at you...

I guess I have to work on the composition/msg if ppl don't find it interesting...

Thanx for the feedback!
作者: 4039127337    時間: 2008-5-13 11:50 PM

Try crop out the things that don't belong to the picture. [attach]303901[/attach]

[ 本帖最後由 4039127337 於 2008-5-14 12:02 AM 編輯 ]
作者: elyn_ng    時間: 2008-5-21 10:55 PM

嗯。。。照片是有点 wash out, 不过调整  curves / saturation / contrast:onion31:  ,效果应该更强烈




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