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作者: rayoflight48    時間: 2010-11-1 08:58 AM     標題: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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% z6 p1 w+ N$ g, T3 l5.39.217.76I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknowntvb now,tvbnow,bttvb7 _9 x1 \" [$ l

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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soulTVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。0 \& ?- H8 K9 u) j9 r- d* Q( J6 Z
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you& c& a+ Z2 ]8 o7 _* b! U# p; k7 W
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb6 Q3 k& Z/ U4 T* l
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  G* M3 d$ l; ~1 m! \9 c; A  \And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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' |& B8 X2 \8 |; r( k5.39.217.76Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.6 ]4 {( R9 x7 ^' n, o4 K% G6 \
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作者: rayoflight48    時間: 2010-11-1 01:16 PM     標題: RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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/ X0 D$ C6 G7 }2 I公仔箱論壇I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown公仔箱論壇6 S4 S3 U- J; e( _* R5 V/ ?7 D# ^% u
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul公仔箱論壇; t. y6 F* f* A% Y

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8 o, ~( R1 _5 i8 WIf I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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- Y- y8 i$ B; `: S) {# b7 [If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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5 c2 a5 g* B/ M. W8 f/ \2 STVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。- O. @7 B) M0 @8 E3 x& _: i
What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb9 N  \. h5 o  l6 k$ E

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+ n- ^9 z  t; w& z9 Y7 r# P! [5 V5.39.217.76And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。7 [% w4 S8 x2 I5 B2 @
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1 ?- J9 t; g$ z, U8 YIf I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?5.39.217.761 Q: G' z$ k1 f  Q5 H

) j) K4 [6 V! B2 A5 sTVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。
7 @6 F2 n* \9 U' f/ T: K公仔箱論壇If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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; M& X1 h) Z4 E) U  B9 Y' K/ @' V公仔箱論壇Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.- w  U" ?$ t$ U6 Z8 t# ]* @9 g# L
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