標題: A poem - 請多多指教 [打印本頁] 作者: rayoflight48 時間: 2010-11-1 08:58 AM 標題: A poem - 請多多指教
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.公仔箱論壇8 Y# X. p+ X2 p p. ?. b
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