標題: A poem - 請多多指教 [打印本頁] 作者: rayoflight48 時間: 2010-11-1 08:58 AM 標題: A poem - 請多多指教
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree? 8 a1 f+ H S" x1 D2 w( d1 dTVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。 & N: c! E4 I# [$ ^公仔箱論壇 4 c+ s- x) k/ V公仔箱論壇What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes.. ?: l! K* n" U8 @ 0 ]* W7 ?1 m8 j8 k | : [1 `. _6 `: n, _6 m) p9 PAnd if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter... " [' I9 @$ T# m" b0 F7 S' r9 i- U2 a公仔箱論壇 2 K! j; K) u. X4 D- j9 Ftvb now,tvbnow,bttvb - w L, G6 ^5 ?" H$ aTVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew? ) K2 m6 x _. o; F6 atvb now,tvbnow,bttvb ' j! v% r" x# T. A% F! z: Ptvb now,tvbnow,bttvb/ S* G0 _ X& W5 p3 |+ \
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