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作者: rayoflight48    時間: 2010-11-1 08:58 AM     標題: A poem - 請多多指教

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& v" L4 u% _! G) K) O  K9 y. JChasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul1 I" G9 F/ i' E* k# X

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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?5.39.217.762 k/ C+ r0 Y2 D& d6 |: c
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb* ^( [& I/ t. m! u6 O
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3 \) Y' d) ^, s# Z5 w公仔箱論壇And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...3 N% w" q3 I! t1 |( z
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? / S- g9 _- V! v' q0 Y; i/ Y! `

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作者: rayoflight48    時間: 2010-11-1 01:16 PM     標題: RE: A poem - 請多多指教

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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown公仔箱論壇7 G& P- V; C5 W0 Y/ d# ^( i4 \# l, L
TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。1 W1 K' e4 _3 o; F. O" v* O1 p
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soultvb now,tvbnow,bttvb1 d# U% h  y9 P2 w' D7 o

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9 d& B' W) j" ~* C, E9 qIf I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for youtvb now,tvbnow,bttvb, @6 K& \2 b7 U# J

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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。2 h* A2 E* H; y7 ?
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。) Y' h6 U8 b" Z
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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