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作者: rayoflight48    時間: 2010-11-1 08:58 AM     標題: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?: T3 c" q5 h3 A! c( V6 E3 s

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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?5.39.217.76, J8 P8 O* {9 s' l9 o8 S
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.' Y6 m" D0 o% a

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作者: rayoflight48    時間: 2010-11-1 01:16 PM     標題: RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled. E$ Y7 G: k; r& P2 m

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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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# f- Y7 L, [* j6 o5 D2 [+ yChasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul( e) E5 B/ c) y  E% s/ I: s/ ^

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TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。% \, ^; {- ?8 E6 J" u5 V: g" `
If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..5.39.217.762 |( F5 K6 n: ]. f: b

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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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