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作者: rayoflight48    時間: 2010-11-1 08:58 AM     標題: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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" G2 A6 p# ?: Q  l) v# r3 h+ atvb now,tvbnow,bttvbChasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for youTVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。/ ?1 s# j6 U9 `& H

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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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% L, e1 T& o( K) H5 I% T公仔箱論壇What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes.., ~& g7 y( c0 s1 {* M9 T
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb4 S1 g4 l! F( O" M' ?, ]: P
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2 e+ `- l, I( Y! ]5.39.217.76If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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# ?5 T- F/ q" }( L: O7 M0 YIf I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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作者: rayoflight48    時間: 2010-11-1 01:16 PM     標題: RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..' C5 n) O5 M7 y4 G* S2 `

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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。( L) \* S- |5 g8 G: `" @
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" M1 @. j/ I& W  g6 M" c公仔箱論壇Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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