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作者: rayoflight48    時間: 2010-11-1 08:58 AM     標題: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you9 D3 `. K# T8 ~, z. N3 b" W. g

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' \( i1 a2 W+ `And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.' s2 x0 x' I$ ?  Q) w: D
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作者: rayoflight48    時間: 2010-11-1 01:16 PM     標題: RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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