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作者: rayoflight48    時間: 2010-11-1 08:58 AM     標題: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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5 {$ h: I6 @8 |1 I/ P1 `3 ~公仔箱論壇I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for youTVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。9 j/ D3 g6 I9 c8 `
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..0 _# V, i6 c! V3 c& t
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb% k/ B* I. Q/ `
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? 公仔箱論壇6 w% l0 [2 P# _6 p
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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作者: rayoflight48    時間: 2010-11-1 01:16 PM     標題: RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled5.39.217.76! S- ]# F5 I/ ^/ w
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/ d* C' i& d5 o. i4 O* @" xI am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul( I& g* D3 @; J: h0 ?

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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you公仔箱論壇9 L& U; w: ?$ v; t

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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?5.39.217.76) V+ F, e+ u2 M
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* T8 `6 c) ]: [% E公仔箱論壇What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...2 ^8 g' Z1 J1 F8 {( F8 `
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7 j! S5 |- n/ M) ctvb now,tvbnow,bttvbIf I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.5.39.217.76& O2 G# b# q3 h$ [( r, ]

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