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作者: rayoflight48    時間: 2010-11-1 08:58 AM     標題: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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/ q( i) Q( Z# Z; P5.39.217.76I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown5.39.217.76' j9 V& S* R' z* y0 R3 o
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* i4 P6 t4 t( C  z  o8 ]If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for youTVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。: t& q0 o( l5 ?- @+ Q- @
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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6 E+ a! C8 W4 X; ]' j8 dAnd if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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* ~0 w* f1 L" e4 r& g1 U) Z) \tvb now,tvbnow,bttvbIf I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? 公仔箱論壇8 d0 H9 m2 X. c* ^0 U

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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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作者: rayoflight48    時間: 2010-11-1 01:16 PM     標題: RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled  b) Q$ t; u; L- |" Y  P
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown2 r( X* X! Q5 t0 e; o

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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul5.39.217.76/ C; @& r! F( b7 B  H; M: H
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for youtvb now,tvbnow,bttvb. G& M' C  W7 R& e' p: w

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; y  q# \' e$ |% u$ W公仔箱論壇What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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7 @& Y& W& m/ F. H; S$ a+ O* E5.39.217.76And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...公仔箱論壇# C% W& F* T% _9 Y2 ^7 {( i

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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? ! a( t+ J" P  Z* a8 o0 P- ?1 Q
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.5.39.217.76- m& C  b$ S- \/ O$ J* ?

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