標題: A poem - 請多多指教 [打印本頁] 作者: rayoflight48 時間: 2010-11-1 08:58 AM 標題: A poem - 請多多指教
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest. * x5 D; K. w) i- s# z% mTVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。5 }( _: W) ]# k& L' y
$ Y S2 _) i2 x3 s5 Ntvb now,tvbnow,bttvbRay of Light 1 y) h. L# _2 d; V4 f# H% ^作者: rayoflight48 時間: 2010-11-1 01:16 PM 標題: RE: A poem - 請多多指教
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