標題: A poem - 請多多指教 [打印本頁] 作者: rayoflight48 時間: 2010-11-1 08:58 AM 標題: A poem - 請多多指教
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest. / I( B) I) K8 I9 s5.39.217.76 " V! K; V" w/ X1 G公仔箱論壇 + L% m4 J; P6 i. h1 `Ray of Light : f& \4 B" [! S1 t" L5.39.217.76作者: rayoflight48 時間: 2010-11-1 01:16 PM 標題: RE: A poem - 請多多指教
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