標題: A poem - 請多多指教 [打印本頁] 作者: rayoflight48 時間: 2010-11-1 08:58 AM 標題: A poem - 請多多指教
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?9 L5 @% I& h5 p. p8 r, {9 b
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..公仔箱論壇9 E4 s; M( m. N
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter... 1 J7 L( Y7 y a0 ^0 F: Q7 U0 Ltvb now,tvbnow,bttvb 0 ?" E7 s; r4 z" u2 t8 F9 b+ Ctvb now,tvbnow,bttvb g( z& P3 [7 ]: F8 \- dTVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?5.39.217.76( D' {" Z! O& l+ @5 V
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? 8 B: e9 x0 m: K& }' S8 [+ ~- u1 g* q D n# @; ^
) o! H% w/ m- [5 B5.39.217.76Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest. / \5 w6 c& K0 [" G& D" G% }TVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。 $ B; B4 F$ w; n: _( ~, ~7 \9 T( r( g8 k7 T
Ray of Light tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb* W! w$ a& Q! V7 k% g, c 作者: rayoflight48 時間: 2010-11-1 01:16 PM 標題: RE: A poem - 請多多指教
A Path Less Traveled ' O6 u7 l- N' q$ Mtvb now,tvbnow,bttvb 8 \" Q; n# l' B- w B) {5 w8 r8 o# ?9 G
I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown " S+ j" n# N+ q- ^ 6 `7 x9 F! T# F" N% ?4 S& i Y0 C 4 J: c- z$ c7 i' {TVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul0 s# o8 Y6 ?1 w8 |' @
TVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。2 a& l3 o( G2 K6 ~6 n$ f) X& R
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes.. 6 g" w2 @9 S) ?8 S9 zTVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。 7 O: L6 D" N" D W( I6 S" B9 B$ l! c0 _/ Q2 ]' Q) E$ x6 x
And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter... , l+ t" u7 ]* \# t: _# e5 U公仔箱論壇 # k5 C' R' r' P2 {9 R% ?TVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。2 M0 h6 R5 X) N* ]6 L4 r" ~+ W& m
If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?5.39.217.76% o! u( l9 o" ~& @9 D4 h
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