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A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul) x8 T' ?0 C: p1 p! n1 `/ f0 e

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# o8 f) x# C- g- H' D/ j; ?/ e公仔箱論壇If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?5 J$ A  Y. M- u4 v1 I

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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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0 `3 ^& U/ F) zAnd if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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. r2 \* d" i7 V. K2 g. q0 Z5.39.217.76If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?$ F* p2 l5 f- d# N

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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb; V, o6 q; a) c8 b( \9 c$ F

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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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A Path Less Traveled  ]( `+ J# Q+ m. X9 W. k( t- T9 v
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown公仔箱論壇% o4 |0 i: ~5 _# o7 J
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.; I% N% M6 m- ~* N* c# T, q

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