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3 x2 `1 a% z- i  c2 h5 X6 oChasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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7 D( a# G; h/ }0 H$ \  e" W5 LIf I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?4 L+ O( @4 U8 B! E( y/ @

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# ~0 P8 P5 i: L- y( R. rWhat if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...5 _3 S8 n& d% s; f' }1 T2 u
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?' N' w9 A; D. G$ L9 P; q) v) M
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb* d3 p, ^4 W1 \- _1 |' T! M# M9 i
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A Path Less Traveled
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you5.39.217.761 S6 P6 O# C, Q+ G2 o

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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..TVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。4 Y6 \* m$ O, Z; W. V

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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? 公仔箱論壇5 Y1 w/ L; `, D2 s3 |* S
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1 N$ ?- a9 _2 [9 e. F( h公仔箱論壇Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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