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A Path Less Traveled
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# E  Y0 c) q" h1 `/ Y9 e% a5 T' rChasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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rayoflight48

A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...TVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。: Y4 S/ @$ s& j8 s3 o: A6 P
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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