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A Path Less Traveled公仔箱論壇! X& s- a' n$ y

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% K' i7 k  Y. x3 ]公仔箱論壇I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown- N' [: [9 O. c. Y4 [

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& Z8 l7 F8 F+ [! kChasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb5 R8 S1 p% f7 ^5 R7 U
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...7 P5 k# W. H9 F% ^1 q. E$ H) y

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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb+ b: o1 o- U5 B3 y
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soultvb now,tvbnow,bttvb2 `' b& Q. d+ _8 X+ \: o/ b; g

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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?; `8 B5 r: ]/ v4 n
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。# V6 i, p/ m" p4 R9 C/ x
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8 c) b" F* c; t( O公仔箱論壇Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.公仔箱論壇+ ^4 U. y% o% ?( d3 q7 \( k( P6 m
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