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& a# o* \1 h1 @+ r5 S  k5 ]3 |0 gI am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you公仔箱論壇0 t+ q7 S4 \1 _8 ~. L7 f# b3 ^
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6 `: n! @6 d% L8 J4 Y公仔箱論壇If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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# C4 @& _0 a2 T5 [公仔箱論壇And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? * F- A: e5 m( [: _( t5 L" m) R

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A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown公仔箱論壇7 ]9 y( Q: I$ K! J( E1 c$ y
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: Z& N0 [3 \* ^# e6 w2 ?; i公仔箱論壇Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?( @3 ]. {0 K( T2 i, w8 y
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4 ~! w5 J0 o# z- h' _. N- V  d1 e公仔箱論壇What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..公仔箱論壇  X  X# q5 ^$ S5 y  G4 t' |% d
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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