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A poem - 請多多指教

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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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% r9 O! ]2 b2 utvb now,tvbnow,bttvbChasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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" ^. c! i4 g  H) s  c7 a) {# W# _+ r$ u5.39.217.76I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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/ L0 V9 [5 U% M7 j! u+ ~9 l6 ~  K% IIf I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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6 t- [" k5 g3 m% _4 R! }: eIf I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?5 [, b; b  S- r, S3 w  R
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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5 g% E2 @( q6 u% c* C7 mWhere I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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