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A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul公仔箱論壇2 n4 z; l; N& b5 ^/ V
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: n; H4 E5 ~$ ^2 B5.39.217.76If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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  {; y. H& n+ ^2 \If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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/ m* g, \9 T4 n9 \# YIf I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? 5.39.217.764 H# d; N3 k! q  R; c
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown公仔箱論壇& M8 N4 U) h2 b, L
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul5.39.217.767 q; k8 E9 ^2 V9 u9 ^, t; P
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you5.39.217.763 }' y& l1 u: Y+ {

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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..5.39.217.76& q  U( |$ m* U) Q, J, @! S

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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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