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A Path Less Traveled
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes... k" e3 u* [0 I' D# `- L

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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown( X2 A2 J2 b1 B3 p
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2 b7 n; W8 T! `4 Q. Q. o& QIf I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...1 n% F/ w' a/ q4 Q  U
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