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A poem - 請多多指教

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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..公仔箱論壇7 d3 o& y% k2 U- M+ Y7 n
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3 T  j0 J5 U7 W1 C; r' n4 A9 ]: @If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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2 G. ^3 |+ |8 s* Z, F5 p/ D公仔箱論壇5 w5 J: s( Q, _, L: a
I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown# _, b' e. n5 W% d4 P
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb9 k$ L) A) g) m& r, [
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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3 @7 _7 C9 P3 o+ u/ J) u5.39.217.76If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? 7 P+ e; R5 ]! q: S9 V: Y

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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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