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A poem - 請多多指教

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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?公仔箱論壇1 n+ y: |. O8 u2 f) p2 z# E* T: ^
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1 q* J+ U/ V) h公仔箱論壇What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..# y3 Y# z. w  k6 ~! Y* N7 d

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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?  G- ~# D2 l- P$ t" O5 P
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? / l. q- S: J: L

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RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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