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A poem - 請多多指教

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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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. h5 @8 L2 F8 Q: T9 h' S5 qChasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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% O& d. }7 A5 Ltvb now,tvbnow,bttvbIf I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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' z" o. P7 s0 b1 pWhat if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?8 V( f3 T2 [, I6 B: t
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled公仔箱論壇3 K% U; B7 g& A# J1 v( f9 D
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+ E1 E' K' A1 ~9 n  ?1 e0 E% g公仔箱論壇I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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+ C' M( Q/ D- y- N! B2 T公仔箱論壇Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul5.39.217.76" R2 d2 ^# b2 p
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6 ?$ l* e) k( x* Y2 L$ W2 U. rIf I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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. w* F$ I4 x6 {6 ]If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.5.39.217.763 _/ o! B# R) o

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