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A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soultvb now,tvbnow,bttvb/ a5 p3 x/ E. p1 u. N( a- n4 \
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?5.39.217.762 r6 L( J% D1 e! L

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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled公仔箱論壇9 T2 K6 ~# a- B5 j
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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7 b4 }( B7 p0 B5.39.217.76Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb& n/ a% X1 ?/ T7 Y" j, N; E( z5 @% {
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