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A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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5 k5 L$ w; C3 II am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown; l: Y" w) Y' z
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soulTVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。) a! D$ I, C/ q$ d( v  [# Q
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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' b5 x* L" f: `9 V4 \, ~5 ntvb now,tvbnow,bttvbAnd if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.; Y, d6 p6 Z7 k, K

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RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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  u7 f& Q: w7 V0 V5.39.217.76I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul' d$ O; }3 ]/ `3 q+ T; a- X1 L$ A
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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( q% \" I" g; @& Y9 B6 JIf I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。, s6 Z( z  U' B6 y) v
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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$ o3 |) X. J- [, @5 t& C; ~5.39.217.76And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?5.39.217.76$ ^0 d' M2 x9 z  V0 R

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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。- [+ j' N& a& Q0 Y* y, A9 n
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