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A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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+ P, O! l2 Z) F  oChasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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4 f4 P( G  Z' y2 w$ I% _) W9 c. pIf I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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5 F* g, J# x7 g  q1 G  n/ q& mIf I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。' X; {& |* v- z' C9 _
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb! t! c" P  B! l7 [  K$ t  Z+ B% ~
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...5 L7 F0 H6 u, H" c# R2 l$ A

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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.公仔箱論壇9 P- v# O1 k- \; z! X/ m( D: X9 x' \
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RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled
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TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。4 R/ v- Q+ H: L; ^2 e7 V
I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul5.39.217.769 ]$ F( ~% ^, [: }. u9 b
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$ p0 x/ ~4 o9 R$ R% l& |, wIf I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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9 G1 D" `, {. E* v2 H4 vIf I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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" K2 ]$ K  Y* \' `4 k9 L+ A5.39.217.76And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。" s! V# A1 n1 c. X: z0 ?2 c- E, i
TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。) _) r" N) \9 L; h
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。3 K9 I) X( Z7 k4 g* o2 J

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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.$ E4 `1 c1 H1 D  o1 ?0 {/ q/ a$ D
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