返回列表 回復 發帖

A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled' }# y( ]! k7 f

; [+ _6 U# w! O" P5.39.217.76
$ |9 T( i" b0 U# s$ p9 q5.39.217.76I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown5.39.217.769 Y) j& W6 t# ?4 S# A
tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb2 A/ X. X) L! P- x

0 U7 _# b' J# U, z1 m! }! PChasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
9 m0 M. l5 N# y9 ]5 g. B- i  ^# B. P& f4 J; E

2 ]$ Y! z1 m# W/ n# v! H# o$ SIf I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you5.39.217.76( r' s2 b2 h% J1 z" y1 |3 S( O, A

7 B9 ~. K# y3 q, n$ ~
6 W7 l  F$ n( V/ s+ k  I公仔箱論壇If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
/ _# O- ~6 I4 ^9 G3 X4 [6 Ytvb now,tvbnow,bttvb5.39.217.766 i2 D1 O+ }; S

! O* ]% [8 z# Q. Z; O3 x( h* sTVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。0 f$ e* q6 s0 K! q8 v

% X3 B& a2 }. w4 W/ p
0 {. G! N: g- h+ x( i6 D6 h公仔箱論壇And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter..." ^6 p2 |* X( j  Q
tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb5 Y' J$ L) k- c3 e6 y! ~

" T- Q& o: g" c( gTVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。; g+ r# P8 b! q8 f) F$ L) K
5.39.217.76& G. s  n1 \, q
tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb4 L/ m6 V. K2 t& y
If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
  \! \6 b& a; N- }9 S; {9 n: X& d- i1 q
tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb+ ~! L. q  E4 d! E
Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
, ^7 @4 q) K! T, qtvb now,tvbnow,bttvb
, h$ a; h' t! }) w5 ?+ Y; Z9 kTVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。, _3 h+ r3 E# D) t* w9 \
Ray of Light
7 p1 A! c4 N8 \! {7 C& l

RE: A poem - 請多多指教

A Path Less Traveled5.39.217.76, y8 v8 g/ Y- ?% [9 L8 }
5.39.217.76* K" ^+ ~' R, r" ^
5.39.217.761 O  ]/ l9 l/ r' c
I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown9 r. a9 v4 i: N0 N+ l  j: ?9 v9 E

  X% G7 ^" `9 }- y$ R5 I1 |9 Ntvb now,tvbnow,bttvb6 ]1 U# f% p+ C6 }. z0 b
Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
* O1 i$ Y! L- V2 ktvb now,tvbnow,bttvb
" X6 C; }# N& S; r9 C8 b6 {1 R* c6 P2 d( fTVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。5.39.217.76. U; W* |& u8 T5 K8 t$ p
If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
( ~  ]; u! ~- O) W% P: v公仔箱論壇tvb now,tvbnow,bttvb% g8 Q! `6 e' J4 L- M" q6 q

6 r0 H; {+ F* a% A! s公仔箱論壇If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?9 u; I. v5 J$ W( M8 S/ R- Z
( h1 e6 F" V+ \# I8 k( f0 ^
5.39.217.76+ `& ~' ?  T3 ~" m
What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..公仔箱論壇$ g, ]) L3 P1 G( e. v% _

+ B$ w. _  n" _  O) z& B0 y$ y1 f5 ntvb now,tvbnow,bttvb
7 y0 W- I; |4 H" z- zTVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...6 L1 S! E  O; \  l$ d+ V
TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。3 |) v6 {; Y# ~* `: W) d/ B

$ k5 n* @, D. S- r4 h' M& P) W* L  Ptvb now,tvbnow,bttvbIf I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
1 Z: b. X7 X9 `0 o  [5.39.217.76
2 p4 V5 I' p0 w9 z3 _1 L5.39.217.76
" w4 u- s# o- Y; F' l, Z公仔箱論壇If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
$ L* Y% v, X' D4 l  q4 o; o4 N
8 a, i0 M' w( STVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。3 o2 A+ Q% b  Q. Q4 X6 }; Z4 l1 L, g
Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
9 D& D$ a8 L1 y1 j. }2 Q& _TVBNOW 含有熱門話題,最新最快電視,軟體,遊戲,電影,動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。/ w) [8 |! E4 L
+ A6 _) f0 L) @0 G
Ray of Light
返回列表